That was really good. The thing is, I have three Furbys (Furbies?). Well, They're my sister's.

CREEPY! I will never again sleep properly, being as I have a furby in my closet. Is your friend's house really that haunted? That's crazy. I like how you wrote it, keeping the suspense to the end. Very well done, in a really scary way.

Remember me from the Legend of Raj? I followed the link to this page. Pretty creepy story I must say...

I enjoyed reading this one. I can imagine that. I've had weird dreams about much lesser frighting things than Furbees.

Great job.

Oh wow, that is totally creepy! I really like it though, especially since I was always afraid of my furby as a little kid. Your grammar is also nice as far as I can tell (I suck at grammar so yea..) Keep up the good work!

Kayla Christine

That was a great story. I always knew those things were evil.Keep Writting.SirScott

Wow. Creepy dream. However, I think the writing style dulled the sensation a little bit. Maybe more description here?

hahaha, i was beginning to think i was the only person that had had a nightmare about furbies. this was really amusing, you should make it into a low budget film. it would be great.

Wow, i was at the edge of my seat with that one. Very nice. You deserve a star... *

"Now dead after the manner of mechanical animal"

I liked that phrase--there's just something about it that's appealing. I also liked your last line, and I liked the piece. It's hilarious, and I don't think there's a one of us who hasn't had the ol' haunted-toy dream before. Nice job. :)

For a story with a genre of "general/tragedy," it's actually very funny. I shouldn't make fun, though. I've had dreams of possessed Furbies before, and holy hell are they scary.

Nice story overall.

Ha ha ha ha ha hahaha! AHA HA HA HA HA HA! STOP!! PLEASE STOP!

This was great. I loved it.

I've totally already read this, but I forgot what I said about it.

Anyways, I like how you turn the simple and give it an edge. I think it might of been more powerful if it was in third person.