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| violet bones 2006-03-02 ch 1, | well done! this is so beautifully tragic. you conveyed emotions so well in this poem. loveVB |
| a lonely september 2006-01-16 ch 1, | pretty. liked 'make all knives teenage-proof'. you did a nice job with the last verse. |
| chaos called creation 2006-01-16 ch 1, | That first line is amazing. |
| poetic abortion 2006-01-16 ch 1, | pretty, pretty; the format is gorgeously perfect & every line just speaks with clarity. :) ~* noelle |
| just a teardrop 2006-01-16 ch 1, | i love this! i really do! :D its beautiful. obsessions with clouds and angels are good! |