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violet bones
2006-03-02
ch 1,
well done! this is so beautifully tragic. you conveyed emotions so well in this poem.

loveVB
a lonely september
2006-01-16
ch 1,
pretty. liked 'make all knives teenage-proof'. you did a nice job with the last verse.
chaos called creation
2006-01-16
ch 1,
That first line is amazing.
poetic abortion
2006-01-16
ch 1,
pretty, pretty; the format is gorgeously perfect & every line just speaks with clarity. :)

~* noelle
just a teardrop
2006-01-16
ch 1,
i love this! i really do! :D its beautiful. obsessions with clouds and angels are good!
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