well done! this is so beautifully tragic. you conveyed emotions so well in this poem.

loveVB

pretty. liked 'make all knives teenage-proof'. you did a nice job with the last verse.

That first line is amazing.

pretty, pretty; the format is gorgeously perfect & every line just speaks with clarity. :)

~* noelle

i love this! i really do! :D its beautiful. obsessions with clouds and angels are good!