Wow, I don't really know what to say. I liked it a lot... I just don't know what to comment on. You really have a way of making words stick and paint a picture. Which this really did for me. I could really feel it. Sort of creepy but in a good way.

wow... this is amazing! i love the last verse in particularly, and the whole rhyme scheme and rhythm is both original and lovely. great job!

OH! I love this! This is awesome! OAJFAJF! I don't know what to say. I suck. hehe but i love this and you!!

Love xox!

I like it YES I do. I would have to say my favourite stanza is the third-last. And the last line rocks. =)

Wonder induceing, I love it I just wish I knew the melody