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| Jowaco 2006-02-13 ch 1, | An extremely powerful piece of writing! It grips the reader and won't let go! |
| Haberdasher 2006-01-16 ch 1, | wow, very poignant (sorry i cant spell) so beautifully written as well. the 2nd person narration was a little destabilising but i cant imagine the story written any other way. reminds me of the themes in Brokeback Mountain. (just saw the movie) like this was an insight to how it could have been. - the Lady Elaine |