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| Celyn 2006-02-16 ch 5,  | Hehehe. That's great. I like your LOGIC thing... will you do more with it? It seems like something that has scope. |
| Celyn 2006-02-16 ch 4, | This is good indeed. Or rather, it is bad. But it is supposed to be bad, as this is how it is good... uh... me shut up now. |
| Shadow Gryphon 2006-02-13 ch 5,  | What an odd ending. Really, really odd. The story within a story ending, I mean. The part with Sage at the very very end is quite nice. |
| Shadow Gryphon 2006-02-09 ch 4, | O.o Ory and Pet in the bushes. I think "shoot up into her hairline" would be a better description for the reader's eyebrows. He hasn't even taken Pet out for dinner! :P *cowers* That chick is creepy. And a whiney brat. Why the hell shouldn't she clean her room? And why wasn't she wearing any shoes? :) Great ending. Will the squirrel show up later? Please? Gryph |
| Shadow Gryphon 2006-01-26 ch 3, | O.o;; Scary beyond all reason. |
| Celyn 2006-01-26 ch 3, | Bwahahahahaha! Oh, this is classic. I am interested, though, to know what the reader is doing... it's like there's something else going on, a kind of meta-story... |
| Shadow Gryphon 2006-01-25 ch 2, | *sniggers* I was worried for a minutes when I saw that the story wasn't under humor, and I really had to wonder if this was going to be serious. *Then* I was worried about the font you'd chosen, 'cause of all the square sign thingies... But it's bloody brilliant, and I want more! *three-year-old mode* More more moremoremoreMORE! *resumes more mature mode* Ahem. Yes. Please update. Gryph |
| Celyn 2006-01-17 ch 2, | Hehe! I love it! Shame the medieval script doesn't show up... but it looks so great. I'm gonna follow this one. |