Reviews for Friendly Persuasion

bex17 2006-02-20 ch 1,	abuseYou should definitely update this!
Tikvah Ariel 2006-01-24 ch 1,	abuseAlthough you spent a lot of time with the buildup, I didn't feel like you were building rising tension. The 'climax' didn't seem like I imagined it, and your character has been made out as a self-pitying arrogant woman. Other then that it was an enjoyable writing style and I hope you continue
DishMesser 2006-01-17 ch 1,	abuseHa! I love how you made Devon so witty. I've met a couple of guys like that. Both heaven and hell to be around sometimes, but that smile always gets ya. Haha. Be well. DM
Juniper Nights 2006-01-17 ch 1,	abusei like! good job
aspirer 2006-01-17 ch 1,	abusewow, great start! i agree with idiot girl on the line of roger's but otherwise, well done :)
Fae Caspian 2006-01-16 ch 1,	abusehi, i do like Devon! I like Ava too, i love the pronounciation of her name, beautiful. Brazil, very exotic, you have quite the makings of a good story here missy. One small thing, maybe its just me, but when Roger says, "He's right here Ava" it makes me think its Roger, because its not clear if he nods her way or something, so when i read it, i thought, "hmm, tacky." but then Devon got introduced and well, he sounds gorgeous and they seem oddly perfect for each other, so nice job! p.s. thanks for reviewing "not so."
hidden-rose 2006-01-16 ch 1,	abuseGreat storyline. I can't wait for this to continue! so... update soon! ^_~