Reviews for Reflection in the Puddle

Ivory Willow 2006-10-27 ch 1,	abuseI'm never gonna look at a puddle the same way again. Great poem
Haunted-dreams05 2006-01-20 ch 1,	abuseintersting way to look at a puddle. I like this. Great work.
maxnotevoltage 2006-01-17 ch 1,	abuseI like your style of poetry. You lay it out simply, yet there is so much profound thought behind it - more than what meets the eye. I really liked your second stanza. At first, it appeared that you were describing just that - a puddle. But then, after I read the rest of the poem and then going back to that stanza, it was awesome to see how those same words and phrases so beautifully described a man's reflection of himself. And so, I am amazed. It's subtle, but it definitely speaks on more than one level, in that way. Awesome, awesome work! Peace be with you:-) -- J.max p.s. Thank you for sticking with my stories! I feel honored:-)
ellie and bananas 2006-01-16 ch 1,	abuseI don't remember what it was from, but I remember reading something about how maybe you're the reflection in the puddle. This is a great poem.