Oh, the things that happen when poets start thinking deep thoughts about random things. I've never read a poem about a puddle before, so I'm not sure I have much to compare it to.

I'm never gonna look at a puddle the same way again. Great poem

intersting way to look at a puddle. I like this. Great work.

I like your style of poetry. You lay it out simply, yet there is so much profound thought behind it - more than what meets the eye.

I really liked your second stanza. At first, it appeared that you were describing just that - a puddle. But then, after I read the rest of the poem and then going back to that stanza, it was awesome to see how those same words and phrases so beautifully described a man's reflection of himself. And so, I am amazed. It's subtle, but it definitely speaks on more than one level, in that way. Awesome, awesome work!

Peace be with you:-) -- J.max

p.s. Thank you for sticking with my stories! I feel honored:-)

I don't remember what it was from, but I remember reading something about how maybe you're the reflection in the puddle. This is a great poem.