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| Wallywuzheer 2006-01-16 ch 1,   | Not bad. I'm not much of a poetry buff, so I couldn't really say what errors there are, if any, but let me ask you this: Is your worldview really that cynical? I mean, we can't really say whether life is bad or not because it depends on how we perceive it. Perhaps love seems like bogus at times because what we thought was love was not, in fact, real love. Why not keep trying? Just a thought. |