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| Summer Walters 2006-09-09 ch 1,   | Nice imagery. |
| Malicious Scars 2006-04-05 ch 1, | This is awesome! Where you thinking of Alice in Wonderland at all when you wrote this? Because I certainly was. Anyways, kudos to you. Cheers,*Scars* |
| Damsel of Disaster 2006-01-18 ch 1, | The story contained so much emotion and decription. I liked it alot. I love the metiphor of thorns draging people down that can be pulled from sleeping beauty. I also liked how in the ending the main character predicted no happily ever after for himself. |