Great job! You've really captured my interest. Pleease update soon!

OMG! Did Cam like move or something? Update Soon!

Well really, how can I not read this with a title like that?

You write very well. I liked how you added the foreshadowing in the first chapter so we know the story will revolve around her and her best friend. I also enjoyed how you put Lee as one of the love interests, which would prove to be very entertaining in the later chapters. I think my favourite character in this has to be Alice. The part about her calling Lee 'buck toothed' and 'You wanna know what I think? It makes you look like a fruitcake! A big, pink, salt-and-pepper haired fruitcake!' made me crack up, literally. The scene where her mother enters proved to be quite a contrast. The dialouge between her and her mother sounds exceptionally done and not overly dramatized. Although, it is a dramatic scene so i don't think that comment really makes sense huh? It's chilling though, and it really gets to the reader which is a plus side.

Overall, it's a good start. Everything seems to be in order. Characterization, diction, dialouge, etc etc. *tweaks moustache*

Hope you continue this, it's a promising one :)