Love

I LOved this!

::hearts:: Much love to this poem. And you, for writing it. This is *so* true. And... yeah. Just, true.

I loved the lines 'Was this the way it was intended/ From his birth/ Not sixteen years past?'

It just makes you think really deeply about what you think about people, be it transsexuals, homosexuals everything that people say is a 'sin'.

Maybe I'm just going to deep into this, but I'm in a soppy mood and I feel like just gushing compliments to people. I came across your profile and your poem, so, ::gush:: _

There we go. I heart for ever and ever, even if you don't write poems all the time. I don't write poems either, hee. I dont even try- wait! I think I tried when I was 11... Hmm. I'll have to think about that. ::gigglesnort::

Brilliant poem, and good luck with all of your writing,

Channa

I liked this a lot!

It's nice the way you seperate the sexes. It gets the point across without being blunt.

Interesting!

hit the nail on the head with this one. i like it because it is true.

madmason

i like this - the contrast between the first description of him and the second is great. nice work!