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| fairytale failure 2006-09-30 ch 1, | Dancing tears...yeah. But you already knew that was brilliant. It was a little soft (good) and a little cliche, but I say if they write it a lot its written for a reason. I only wish this poem was longer, with more to understand & enjoy. |
| laughing in her sleep 2006-05-04 ch 1, | whoa this is so incredibly beautiful. i love how u made the tears dance. puts a cool picture in your mind...keep writing! us*A |
| Dveyoni 2006-04-22 ch 1, | Beautiful, the way u talked of crying as dancing. it was a powerful move and it worked compleately (i know i spelled that all wrong)fav stories list. |