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Reviews For: The Tears You Cried

fairytale failure
2006-09-30
ch 1,
Dancing tears...yeah. But you already knew that was brilliant. It was a little soft (good) and a little cliche, but I say if they write it a lot its written for a reason. I only wish this poem was longer, with more to understand & enjoy.
laughing in her sleep
2006-05-04
ch 1,
whoa this is so incredibly beautiful. i love how u made the tears dance. puts a cool picture in your mind...keep writing!

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Dveyoni
2006-04-22
ch 1,
Beautiful, the way u talked of crying as dancing. it was a powerful move and it worked compleately (i know i spelled that all wrong)fav stories list.
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