Beautiful metaphors, descriptions, emotive language...everything! Great couplet at the end as well. Keep your nibs sharp and mind sharper, Avameris

are you fluent in japanese? i think its cool if you are. I knew what aishiteru meant. i read it in a story about a manga

Aww this poem is so sweet! I had to review something since you gave me a nice review and you have no email listed.(I'd do anything for a fellow X-Japan fan) I honestly really liked this powem especially the last part, I'm going to sing it to Yuichi-chan later _. "Forever love, forever dream!" heehee.

Wow, amazing and filled with so much love :).

This is sweet, especially the last verse. I like the language you use in your descriptions. Thank you for your review as well.

EB

That is so sweet!

B

Love it! Very good word phrasing!

i loved your poem. it was really sweet and real.(and about white-chokolat he is a fucking lame but he has a right to his oppions it's just he's wrong about your poem, it was great. and he wouldn't know a good poem because he's suck.) good luck to ya. and keep writing.p.s. i love japan and anime

Very good poem, sensual and powerful, I love the words here and the way you write is amazing. I look forward to reading more by you.

laugh the fuck out loud PATHETICalmost as pathetic as the hmwell can't disrespect my love for samurai