Beautiful. It just makes me want to pull up a canvas, and create the 'winds of May' and 'torrential rains.' Sweet words contained in a colorful backround. Keep up the cookie points

The diction in this poem is superb. You can see the picture in your mind, and that should always be the purpose of a poem that reflects nature. Fantastic job. Only, I believe 'pon', you're using the shorter version of 'upon', correct? It should appear like this. ('pon) It takes the place of the u. SCORE: 9/10

The Critic, DevilDragon of Pain

The imagery in this poem I loved so much, and a great vocabulary never hurts it either. This is really great, I love it.