i love it..i truly do this one hold so much emotion and the poem itself just seems to flow. yes there are some wkward moments in the flow of the poem...um i cant really explain what i mean about that but...yea

hey, i really like this. it reminds me of someone i know who is exactly like this! i love it. write more!

A great flow in the beginning. and I liked the first two lines. Entitled to greatness once you've practice your special skills in poetry.Brownie Points!

I'm very glad I decided to read this poem. A poem that most anyone can relate to. The flow is consistant and not jumply like other poems I've read in the past on this sight. (It's hard to find good poetry now a days.) I hope to read more of your work in the future. You have talent that simply needs to be...refined? Not quite the word I'm looking for. You get the picture.SCORE: 8/10

The Critic, DevilDragon of Pain

... Wow. This runs really deep. I can feel that kind of emotion in this. I think that is a good sign to a great piece. Keep writing!