A sweet story. I'm glad Malin found joy in his new life...and Vasilis...hehe.

Very nice.

The time line of the last bit was odd. I understand an entire story being framed, lots of stories start that way, but the last section was framed as well. If I think of it as a epilogue, it makes sense though.

Awh! I really loved this story! XD it was great, and so funny and other points. This was a super special awesome story, you're an awesome writer! d(^.^)b

Malin

I've reread this story about five million times. I love it. Too much.

It's high time I added it to my favorites.

Thank you. :)

Very cute. Light and fluffy, like a warm plate of buttermilk pancakes in the morning. I enjoyed it very much. Malin was very likeable, although Vasilis was kind of shallowly portrayed. It is from Malin's pov, but Vasilis could've been more fleshed out. Anyway, overall, very well written. I know you said that this was just a little piece of fluff, but if still made me want to read more of your writing. It gave me a taste of the wonder, so now I want more.

OMFG This is awesomely epically awesome! I love it!

THis story was so soothing. I doubt I've felt so peaceful from a story before...
Thanks You're an awesome author and this made my weekend and I'm probably going to sleep well tonight. .. . creepy? Well, yeah, I suppose. I'll go off to think happy thoughts now...

Very cute story. I loved it and it had a really good flow =)

I like Vasillis the best
:)
:K
Bloodfeeder

The ceremony was very interesting. i really wondered how you were going to go from sacrifice to wife, but you did it in such a unique way that it didn't even remotely cross my mind that way. i like how you capture the confusion with "but i like girls!"

This is a beautiful piece. It was only a oneshot but it was as great as a novel. :)

Very nicely done. Bravo!

the ending, when Malin feel jealous..i can identified with his feeling..like you know that Vasilis love him but they still will be doubt whether Vasilis will forever and undyingly love him..but fortunately the second wife is Lori so she understand the situation..but you can understand the feeling of jealousy that consumes when the person you love slept with somebody else is like terrifying! but i kinda love the character Vasilis, eventhough hes like so overbearing and protective towards Malin, its just one of his way to show him that he loves him and never wanted to be separated with him..the story is kinda a bittersweet story..its bitter in the one side..but when you really understand its like sweet in the other side..so its like so great that you can do that..

This was interesting- the relationship between captive "wife" and Emperor was wel developed, and i particularly liked the description of Malin's Escape attempts.
Nice.
Erisah