True that. This is so real, I love it. Keep it up, you have true talent.

Shavo

the staircase of illusion, if one breaks, the rest follow.

i really like this one. to me the best out of your recent ones.

First of all, I have GOT to say, that I love your pen name. Its very unique and original. Second of all, I'm going to shower you with pretty compliments for this piece, which was really good. It was written wonderfully, loving how you had put some dialogue into it. You have got some great talent in you, so keep on writing! Do check out my work if you've got the time.