|Reviews for Love Never Lasting|
| blackflowers 4/3/09 . chapter 1
"Feasting himself sick
On her pathetic sins"
great imagery and expression in this, i agree with the other reviewers about the last line and really look forward to more of your writing (:
| A. E. Custer 3/5/07 . chapter 1
This poem was an awesome read - I really think the diction and you're writing style really paints a fantastic image.
| paytonpage 8/9/06 . chapter 1
that was one of the best i've ever read im at a loss for words.
| Ordrossal 7/29/06 . chapter 1
Other than 'I really love your poems' I don't no what to say. I look forward to your future works.
| Aluminum Tinkerbell 7/27/06 . chapter 1
Wow. Once again, very nice! It's very pessimistic, but the imagry's amazing. I really like: "With razorblade smiles", and "Enslaved by cursed skin" for some reason.
| ShyDarkness 2/1/06 . chapter 1
o, nice. I definetely liked the last line. It had a nice finality to it.
| from beneath the bell jar 1/19/06 . chapter 1
oh cool - i like "razorblade smiles" and "no love to conquer hate". Keep Writing.