"Feasting himself sick

On her pathetic sins"

great imagery and expression in this, i agree with the other reviewers about the last line and really look forward to more of your writing (:

This poem was an awesome read - I really think the diction and you're writing style really paints a fantastic image.

that was one of the best i've ever read im at a loss for words.

Other than 'I really love your poems' I don't no what to say. I look forward to your future works.

Wow. Once again, very nice! It's very pessimistic, but the imagry's amazing. I really like: "With razorblade smiles", and "Enslaved by cursed skin" for some reason.

o, nice. I definetely liked the last line. It had a nice finality to it.

oh cool - i like "razorblade smiles" and "no love to conquer hate". Keep Writing.