Reviews for Lies and Bitterness

In State of Agony 2006-03-28 ch 1,	awesome work..."But I cover up the pain, with such a simple thing like asmile"...i can related so much with this piece...i specially like the first stanza. god job... This world is (In State Of Agony)
fairEtales 2006-03-25 ch 1,	I didn't take it as dark...I liked the mood you set. I'm not exactly sure if I got the correct meaning, but I really liked your summary (Sometimes you DO have to be the last one standing
Moosher 2006-02-26 ch 1,	WOW. You can really write. this was really good. Dark, and powerful and so deep. I was looking for something good to review. I loved how you worded it. and your word choice. I also liked the rhyming I discovered throughout the poem. Beautiful writing. Keep it up! --Meme
Crimson Riley 2006-01-18 ch 1,	there are so many emotions in this poem it's hard to hold on to any one in particular, but i think that's what is meant to be conveyed here... loss, confusion, emptiness, heartache, pain, fear... it's all there and there with such passion! wonderfully written thanks for share your amazing work
Faithless Juliet 2006-01-18 ch 1,	For this façade is nothing but a game -I like this; the meaning and depth I think is very truthful for us all. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet.