I liked every part of it.

I think I get this, hard to fall asleep always awake, until you fall asleep. Might be wrong, but I like it.

I liked "I / Fall." just because it seemed so final. Also, I liked "falling / into / X"- that was really cool. Keep writing!

Deep and well-dtailed - I can really relate to this, I alays daydream during the day and have dreams like this when I sleep. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.