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| BahamutsTear 2008-03-26 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful, a very passionate piece. Your grandma would be proud. |
| W. Griffin 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abusethat is an excellent poem in its simplicity, but obvious meaning and love - GREAT job! -w. griffin |
| hazyglow 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abuseThis reminds me of the relationship I had with my grandmother .. it describes it perfectly. .. thanks for bringing back the memories :) |
| Hoodwynk 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseThat's really cool that you shared that bond with your Great-grandmother. Neat. |
| LittleDoe 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful words! I wasn't able to find a ryming/rythem pattern, wich kind of threw my reading off, (I like to read stuff aloud to myself) but the words and the imagery are inspiring. It is wonderful when there are those that leave us with inspiring memories. Such loved ones never truly leave us. God bless you. ~LittleDoe |
| Oona-ee 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseAww, I really loved reading this. It made me remember my grandmother who passed away a few years ago. After reading this, I realized that I should have cherished those moments I had with her even a bit more. I actually let my mom read this poem, and a smile that reached her ears spread across her face as she mumbled the words, "I knew she wasn't really gone." Overall, you have created a wonderful poem. Many kudos to you. :D -- Oona-ee |
| DiaRose 2007-10-26 ch 1, | abuseSimple, but sad. I like it. Love, ~Dia |
| loversdream17 2007-10-25 ch 1, | abuseI love it i wouldn't use it for my grandma we didn't get along but my grandpa i would totally use it. Thanks for writing it i love it. Mandi |
| SpottedStar 2007-10-09 ch 1, | abuseWow...I found myself relating this poem to my great grandmother. So many people say I take after her with words and stuff like that. You did an awesome job on this poem. Keep Writing :) |
| patitofeo 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abusei like it... i love a piece that shows emotion. |
| S. Ben Beach 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abusewow, that's really sweet.. :) i can definitely relate, love the short lines and how simple but effective the message gets through. |
| KalinaGirl 2007-06-01 ch 1, | abusenice job...really good!! Yeah...how do you get so many reviews? |
| PrettyHateMachine66 2007-05-07 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, this is a wonderful poem. |
| Music by Moonlight 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is lovely...but 221 (+1) reviews?! How did you manage?! |
| painted.music 2007-04-19 ch 1, | abusekonban wa This reminds me a bit of my great-grandma -- Grandma Norma. When I used to visit her with my grandpa, she was already in an old-age home. We used to visit her, and you could just see how her eyes would light up at seeing us; it was really beautiful. She loved to spend time with us and would always be so excited just to hug and kiss her great-grandkids. I really loved her. She passed away when I was ten, and I'm sorry to say that I don't have that many memories of her. But this poem brought back many memories that I didn't know I had. It was a very powerful piece, and I absolutely loved it. Your reader can really see your affection for your great-grandmother. Never stop writing! Ki o tsukete nee, tomodachi -Shan- |