Wow... this has me on the edge of tears... it was beautiful, and i'm so glad i read it. :) You're inspiring. xox

xx Boat xx

Hey,
This was just too sweet! Really beautiful :) Nice work!
ranDUMM

this was so amazing. and totally ironic b/c ive been trying to think of a good enough poem to write about my great grandma. you said exactly what i would have wanted to. i can relate so well.

Reminds me of how much I love my own grandmother. The sentiment here was so pure and to boot it was wonderfully written. Please don't stop producing such good stuff.

This is beautiful. My grandfather died this year on my birthday when I was there celebrating with him. This is really similar to my feelings. Thank you for putting them in such a beautiful way.

P.S. thanks for reviewing my poem =)

Your great-grandmother would be proud of you. This piece shows real emotion and was beautiful to read.

-RiBow.

your very good with your words. keep writing and never stop!

Beautiful, a very passionate piece. Your grandma would be proud.

that is an excellent poem in its simplicity, but obvious meaning and love - GREAT job!

-w. griffin

This reminds me of the relationship I had with my grandmother .. it describes it perfectly.

.. thanks for bringing back the memories :)

That's really cool that you shared that bond with your Great-grandmother. Neat.

Beautiful words! I wasn't able to find a ryming/rythem pattern, wich kind of threw my reading off, (I like to read stuff aloud to myself) but the words and the imagery are inspiring. It is wonderful when there are those that leave us with inspiring memories. Such loved ones never truly leave us.
God bless you.
~LittleDoe

Aww, I really loved reading this. It made me remember my grandmother who passed away a few years ago. After reading this, I realized that I should have cherished those moments I had with her even a bit more. I actually let my mom read this poem, and a smile that reached her ears spread across her face as she mumbled the words, "I knew she wasn't really gone."

Overall, you have created a wonderful poem. Many kudos to you. :D

-- Oona-ee

Simple, but sad. I like it.

Love,
~Dia

I love it i wouldn't use it for my grandma we didn't get along but my grandpa i would totally use it. Thanks for writing it i love it.
Mandi