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| Boo! The Roc hath Returned! 2006-07-08 ch 1,  | Yeah...I changed my email. But about this...I love it. |
| BlackDreamLily 2006-04-13 ch 1,  | O... chilling. I like it. I liked the way you used nature's voids as metaphors. (ie- "perpetual sea of apathy," "hallowed golden moon," "starlet sea," et cetera.) Lovely language. Bravo, my friend! ^_^ |
| Water*Healer 2006-03-27 ch 1, | I think you should name this poem better than "Nevermind." Because, it's very good. Anyway, thanks for revewing my story. ~Water*healer |
| Spectra16 2006-01-18 ch 1, | Woah. . . that's deep. Ennui! Ennui! |
| rose b 2006-01-18 ch 1, | o... has my poetryness made you want to write something? or are you just awsome? |
| ------- 2006-01-18 ch 1, | Its so sad, but so sweet. I like how you changed "Hallowed" to "hollowed", holy to empty... or was that a typo? anyways, I enjoyed it alot! |
| FictionPressPenName 2006-01-18 ch 1, | Beautiful imagery. It was so sad, and the subject was really interesting and one of the ideas that hasn't already been done to death, so congradulations on that. I really did enjoy reading it. Great job again. |
| kdoll. 2006-01-18 ch 1, | it's a cute poem and poetic. |