Wow, cool new edited version! :D

If feels like she got away a little too easily, but this is still a really nice story you'v written so far. I wonder if she'll ever see her "sisters" again? I'm excited to see what you'll do with Skye in the crippled futuristic America. Great work so far.

This is one of the stories I wouldn't mind reading again, because it's just that interesting, and one notices a lot of stuff the second time around. Congrats, there have only been three books that I read twice or more (Harry Potter and Jennifer Government are the other two). So yeah, that's a compliment. And you really have edited this well. If only I could do the same thing... of course, it would require cleaning out my room to find the original copies...

Oh no! I stopped reviewing! GYAAH! Okay, anyway, I'm being weird again. KEEP IT UP!

Errmm.. I really dont know what else to say except great story!!

Hey! Good chapter! Wow, I feel repetitive. Is the cat thing new? Can't remember...

Ermm.. I really don't know what to say except great edited chapter!!

Ah.. I just LOVE the last sentence!! Totally and completely cool!! Great chapter!!

Looks like I had time after all. I felt like reading the second chapter, because I was bored. Oh, and did I put on the other chapter, "Keep up the good write, I meant work instead of write. I'm such a dork.

This is a nice story you have here, greatly detailed to me. I wish I could write detailed. And, I like the idea being it in the future, but shouldn't this be in science fic? Oh well, It's your story not mine. Anyway, I'll try to read the next chapters if I can. I would write than this, but I feel lazy right now. SO, keep up the good write. ^_^

Water*Healer

I love this chapter too! It rocks! This whole story rocks!

Anonymous again! Wait... did I review chapter 8? Will do that now. Great chapter! I love this story!

Aw.. so sad.. This part always makes me a little sad.. haizz. Skye exchanged her freedom for someone else's.. very noble.. haha.. anyway.. great story!!

Cool!! I thought the edited version will be just like the original but I was wrong!! Well done!!

i'm really liking how this is continuing. did i mention i like the main character a lot? your style of writing really makes this story one-of-a-kind. :)