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| xanthofile 2006-02-03 ch 5,   | it was really fast paced, and rather fluffy after all...but it was still a sweet read. i rather liked it. even if you made the only real potential hang up not be as bad as it -should- have been. *what, me, bitter? naw...* anyhow, that was too cute!! and you're done with my bizarre and rambling reviews that are more like strange remarks than anything else. *ramble ramble ramble* does that ever sound like a charlie brown 'wha wah wah' to you? because i read it and heard it that way. O.o odd. |
| xanthofile 2006-02-03 ch 4, | damn it. you ruined my happy bubble. *sighs* still, it's incest in name, right?? right? *lost and pathetic whisper* |
| xanthofile 2006-02-03 ch 3, | ha, i knew it. *family family family love* i like it. what's wrong with a little nephew/uncle romance?? *puzzled stare* oh wait, i'm the freaky one with a flare for the incest. nevermind! but it was cute the way he cried, "My God, i've been dating my nephew!!" made me laugh. |
| xanthofile 2006-02-03 ch 2, | aw sweet! but somehow, i get the foreboding sensation deep in my gut. things are going just a little too pefectly...*that's me, the optimistic pessimist* |
| xanthofile 2006-02-03 ch 1, | oh wow, this is refreshingly different somehow. can't quite put my finger on it, but i definately get a different feel from this than others. and the name thing...whee. i had funn just saying their names three times fast!! ok, off to the next chapter i'll go...*snow white, anyone??* |
| hyper leaping frog 2006-01-19 ch 5, | *eek!* AW... that was SUPER AWSOME! THat was the coolest story i have read in a long time. so sweet...so adorable! i totally wish i could go into the story to see that. it would be awsome...i suppose i should get back to 'studing' for finals. (aka reading your stories with a spanish book next to me) |
| Red-Chan 2006-01-19 ch 3, | HAHAHA... but really thats almost sick... update soon so I can figure out if he's set brothers half brothers or whatchamacallits. |
| hyper leaping frog 2006-01-19 ch 3, | hahahahah... that was very unexpected. right now im coughing as to not atract attention for me laughing. (in in school) that was so GOOD! now im DYING to read what happenes. i hope they dont break up. that would be sad... but why didn't the mom know it was him. i mean wouldnt she have recognized Red? hm... Meditate on this i will... |
| hyper leaping frog 2006-01-18 ch 1, | cool. this story is getting really good! i like the...creep direction that its going it. well, i dont actualy think its creepy creepy, but for lack of a better work, its creepy. i totaly cant wait for the next chapter! |
| omaterluna 2006-01-18 ch 1, | wow. this is the first slash fic ( or w/e u wanna call it). It's really good thought. Update soon. |
| The Cute Little One 2006-01-18 ch 1, | wow this is really good*giggles* sounds like fun hope this one is a long one ^_^ |