 Louellena 2006-01-24 . chapter 1beautiful... gotta love snow when it's so pretty. ~Lou~ |
 SiriusFan13 2006-01-18 . chapter 1Lovely... I know what you mean about snow... nice word choices:) and i like the rhyming as well:)*hugs*nice job:)
Sirius |
 sueb262 2006-01-18 . chapter 1This one creates a hushed atmosphere, and the last line adds a note of depth and a touch of the dark. Nicely done! |
 Ygg 2006-01-18 . chapter 1Nice and simple Haiku, but with possibly deeper meanings if you look for them! Especially the last line stands out for me, in relation to the previous two lines. Great work!
Keep writing. |
 Sunflower dream 2006-01-18 . chapter 1hum... it's funny because i also wrote a "haiku" ( which is in fact just a very short poem) to snow when i was in school but it turned out quite different... it's just interesting to see how people see things differently |
 R-Vega-X 2006-01-18 . chapter 1Good but mabye a little too short.
R-Vega-X |