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Louellena 2006-01-24 . chapter 1
beautiful... gotta love snow when it's so pretty. ~Lou~
SiriusFan13 2006-01-18 . chapter 1
Lovely... I know what you mean about snow... nice word choices:) and i like the rhyming as well:)*hugs*nice job:)

Sirius
sueb262 2006-01-18 . chapter 1
This one creates a hushed atmosphere, and the last line adds a note of depth and a touch of the dark. Nicely done!
Ygg 2006-01-18 . chapter 1
Nice and simple Haiku, but with possibly deeper meanings if you look for them! Especially the last line stands out for me, in relation to the previous two lines. Great work!

Keep writing.
Sunflower dream 2006-01-18 . chapter 1
hum... it's funny because i also wrote a "haiku" ( which is in fact just a very short poem) to snow when i was in school but it turned out quite different... it's just interesting to see how people see things differently
R-Vega-X 2006-01-18 . chapter 1
Good but mabye a little too short.

R-Vega-X
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