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| Chiclets 2008-11-03 ch 22,   | Ugh, I don't think I realized you updated until now. I understand what you mean about making your characters suffer - I am in somewhat of a similar dilemma. Your writing has not suffered, however; keep writing strong! :) |
| greenenvy16 2008-08-21 ch 22, | Yey, finally an update. Great one at that. Can't wait for more interaction between Clay and Jordan. |
| shmandie 2008-08-09 ch 22, | :'(. what a sad (but good) chapter. poor cassidy. sigh. sigh sigh. shmandiepants liked your descriptions by the way. i liked the blushing one. hahah. i imagined that anime like. XD. now start writing more. D |
| AlijaS117 2008-08-07 ch 22, | wow so sad!! hope it turns out well for cassidy and dillon.I can't wait for the next chapter!please update soon! |
| benozir 2008-08-06 ch 22, | AWesomee!! that was a great chapter!!. continue writing it was really good. |
| benozir 2008-06-22 ch 21, | Unsigned is officialy my favourite story. I loved it. when i really like a story i usually send messages on every single chapter. But lately i"ve been so busy i haven"t had much time to do that for this story. but i would definitely have . I really want dillion& cassidy and Clay& jordan to end up together . please continue writing. i am looking forward to the next chapters. The story is AAWesome!. Me and ,my friends are crazy for it. from this point i will be reviewing or sending messages for every chapter. |
| AlijaS 2008-06-16 ch 1, | I love this story, it is officially my favorite! I can't wait till the next chapter!! Hope you upload soon! |
| SkiTtLe 2008-04-25 ch 15, | Aw...I really liked the way you wrote the last bit...about Clay's New Year Wish...that was a very sweet moment. |
| SkiTtLe 2008-04-24 ch 12, | I would have liked to see more conversation with Jet's father. Like did he tell him he was gay? Or what happened? (maybe he will later) Also you forgot to add what they were throwing at the underwear running kids :) But it was a fun chapter...too bad Clay and Jo got interrupted by his family! |
| Inkbl0t 2008-04-21 ch 21, | Nu! Aw fu--frick! ...Now I have to wait for the next update. *pouts* Darnit. |
| Kim Bell 2008-04-14 ch 21, | Aww, I'm sorry about your breakup. :[ I don't blame you for delaying the update a bit. |
| dancing cake pants. ? 2008-04-13 ch 21, | dangit i wish i didn't react to the story while talking to you. SO. i really liked this chapter & the cliff. oh snap. after i read, i literally yelled OH SNAP. & i really like how you tied in what has happened to you the past few... idk... WEEKS + MONTHS. i think it worked very well, especially since i was umm very familiar with what has been going on the past few weekmonths. i would giggle at moments where i knew WHERE I KNEW. hahaha. but yes. update soon. D: |
| Icyglaze 2008-04-13 ch 21, | I really do adore your story and the characters in it. Although I do hope you'd update soon, maybe it'd be best to take a little break to make yourself happy again. :) The last thing you need right now is a FP story to tie you down. :) Just...when you're feeling better, please remember us...your readers...and update. :) *huggles* |
| SuperCUTEJensen 2007-12-21 ch 20, | great chapter...I love jordan and Clay...I want to see them together/...cant wait for the next chapter...hope you update soon |
| playgroundunited 2007-11-16 ch 20, | i love your writing style. and the interactions between Clay and Jordan. clever. get the next one up quick! i can't believe i read the prequel and then this one in one go. 0.o |