this is truly wonderful. magical and oh so vivid. great job!

i simply love this! it wonderful! beautifully written. i don't think there is any other way to descirbe this. it's lovely!

Wow. O.O

Good god, that was amazing. i wont quote anything cause i'd end up quoting the entire poem, but dear mother of something can you write. brilliant. Simply brilliant.

I like the way you wrote Persephone, so violent.

Lol, what can one say? I've seldom read such violent poetry, hate oozed from every damned word, this sordid, twisted passion...it's just so evil somehow...so brilliant, I adore this...amazingly powerful, you really feel the whole love-hate-passion triangle thing...very much like greek mythology...Love, Mia

wow. that was definetly something to be read. incredible

wow so pretty. loving the imagery and the word choice. it made such a big impact. nice collab, guys!

a new spin on persephone.

and two poets collide.

gorgeous.

Wow, this is great, I really liked it, great work!

the ending is by far my favorite. the whole idea of persephone so violent is new to me, but i love it.

I love the overall tone. You don't really associate Persephone with violence and the darker sort of things. At least, I always see her as a victim. I like this.

the lady twists her fingers intothe nymphet's curls, ripping hair.'scared, beauty?you should be.'-so violent-i worship it. the ending left me empty.

I love the feel of this.

-stares- i don't know how the fuck you do it, i really don't. it's amazing.