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S0ulSearching 2006-04-07 . chapter 1
awsome!! and...it's been a while...*frown* I'm sorry...anyways, keep it up, I completely agree with you ^_^--pammy-
sarah1491 2006-01-30 . chapter 1
Very good! I love it!
Rina-Lyn Bae 2006-01-18 . chapter 1
I like it... Very true, and very well written. Applause for you!

Adieu,~~RLB
Faithless Juliet 2006-01-18 . chapter 1
"With love all things are possible."I truly want to believe...But mankind doesn't want to love.We live hypocrisy.

-I like love is possible - love is wanted, if not always welcomed, or needed at the time.

"A penny saved is a penny earned."What if it's saved for naught?Before it's spent, you pass away.It's taken without thought.

-This is the kind of thing that you tell yourself on payday when you see this amazing outfit in a store window and you think: “Oh, I shouldn’t” but you always do and then never wear it, and you think: “I could have saved that money for something useful!”

"All good things come with the test of time."But how long should one have to wait?Sometimes entire lives play outwithout return on ones good faith.

-I’ve personally never liked that saying - it’s never made since or fit into my life. I guess I’m not the kind of person to wait for things - or if I wait to long I loose interest.

"Do unto others as you'd have to yourself."You hear it all around the world.How often, though, is it seen in motion?Hypocrisy of life unfurled.

-I agree with that creed, and try to live by it - it’s hard though, on both ends. Like religion, you believe in heaven but you also except hell, its always a strange kind of offsetting balance. This is very insightful. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.
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