Whoa..this is really amazing! Love it! Keep writing.

that was so beautiful! i cried at the end lol...im kinda depressed today...that was amazing.

That was good poem. You are a great writer...keep posting you tsuff i haven't seen anything from you in a while.

Wow! Great song you wrote there. I like how it tells a story. You have to read it at least twice to really grip it (I like that). Is "artroom" really one word? Only one minor complaint: lines with "CGI studio/computer" in them don't flow as well as the rest. Oh, well, that's just me (I don't see anyone else complaining). The best song out here that I've read yet. Keep it up.

Wow. That was fantastic.

Awesome. I really, really liked it. Very very good.