you might not like this poem but i do, it's got kind of a carefree way of writing to it, but the poem itself means so much more than the way it's written.

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I love how that last part rhymes. Just amazing. haha I say that every time but it's true. I love fireflies and how they work into this poem.

I can't see why you don't like this. I think it's wonderful.

That last stanza is so sensational. And autumn-boy eyes (I have those I think, at least it sounds better than muddy, confused green). Formatting feels more natural in this btw, compared to one of your recent ones (I think it was "or something like that." Lots better. Keep it up :)

Magical. I loved this!

Wow, this is really good. I especially liked the symbolism in it.

Firefly lies is really lovely... fun to say.

Nice poem. XD

I adore the last stanza: "(there were firefly lies/in your eyes when we set them/free/so baby/why won't you do the same for/me?). I love the image of "the tequila on his sweet-talk tongue" as well.

4th & 5th stanza did me in. I've been reading poem after poem, trying to find the ideas in my heart on paper because I can't write them (it would kill me) and I've found it-the pina nad the acceptance and the ohpleaseletmego that I get from this. My god.

The phrase 'firefly lies' is very pretty. Keep it up.

I like it..it's really pretty and flows well!

ah, well your work is always magnificent.

you mention tinkerbelle a like me and water thougheveryone has their thing.

The voice in this, as always, speaks out boldly. Lines like, "there wouldn't be ripped-wing promises", use this self-empowered voice to come across distinctly. Interesting read.

i like this, brought back tons of memories. lovely.