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| Cupid's Jinx 2008-01-03 ch 23,  | abuseYAY! My computer let me finish reading it! (after many reboots and kicks, but lets not go into too much detail...) I love, love, LOVED it! So awesomly amazingly discriptive and just...awesome! WOOP! Laurie -x- |
| Cupid's Jinx 2008-01-01 ch 6, | abuseHi, sorry, random...kinda...but, I was reading this, and it won't let me onto the next chapter. Chapter 8, it'll do - it just doesn't seem to like chapter 7... Don't know if it's just my damn computer screwing up again - but I thought I should point it out, just, you know, in case... Hm, yeah So, I really love it so far! Maybe I should try it tomorrow... :D Laurie -x- |
| Chamella 2007-06-14 ch 23, | abuseLovely story, romantic and all... |
| Gentle. Edge. 2007-05-03 ch 23, | abuseCHESY. But, I liked it. I read it all in ONE DAY! (I'm a speed reader so don't think I spent like 7 hours reading... it was only about 2 and a half) I really liked it and though it was a bit cliche, I liked it. Especially all the drama that expected, but not expected at the same time. Wait, did that make sense? Point is: your story was really good and I liked it. =D |
| cassy 2007-04-30 ch 23, anon. | abuseI loved it! I wanted to slap the people who kept interupting, but oter than that it was spiffy. |
| Hana 2007-04-24 ch 23, anon. | abuseDang i havn't read this in so long, i lovedd the ending. :) |
| RunBabyRun 2007-04-20 ch 23, | abuseYour story is so cute *squeal*, and yeah...Andrew is like the best boyfriend in the world, I'm still in love with Ace, (actually more so with the guy you pictured as Ace! what's his name, where's he from, can I get his number?) he seems so cool, I'd let him cheat on me a million bazillion times if it helped. NOW GO UPDATE! |
| carlyatthedisco 2007-04-10 ch 22, | abuseSERGIO! :D |
| Sarah D. F. Wall 2007-04-09 ch 23, | abuseI really wanted to cry a lot in this. I liked it a lot. My only beef is that...It seemed very rush. All of these tramautic things just happened with 0 closure. I loved your characters, and to me, that's the redeeming part of any story, but yeah. |
| ANGEL992210 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abuseAMAZING |
| somuchformyhappyending 2007-04-04 ch 1, | abuseOkay, you think MY story was amazing? this is a great beginning. I absolutely LOVED how you started with the whole thing on mood rings because it made your character seem so real. and no, I'm not saying this because you send me a totally sweet review; I'm saying this because it's amazing how you took something so random and...well, random and turned it into something so...gah. I don't even know what I'm talking about. And the second reason why I liked this so much is because your characted IS me. No, seriously, this is me. well, the whole 't-shirt' wearing thing is me. I have a feeling the main character of my story and the main character of your story would be best friends. hmm...they really would. anyway, great start! bec |
| CHIIJOY 2007-03-31 ch 23, | abuseAwe, sweet ending. Love-heart-faint it. :D |
| Jess 2007-03-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a really awesome story! And...I was wondering, where you got that picture of Ace from? He is REALLY hot! :D So yeah...^^ |
| SparklingStar25 2007-03-20 ch 23, | abuseSo cute!Loved this.And a sequel sounds great but its just really sweet the way it is. |
| Espeaje 2007-03-05 ch 23, | abuseMake that two people who spent their entire night reading this story. I love your use of conversation, like the character is really just talking to a friend in telling this story; it brings up some really good humor. |