Wow but of course they are only more elegant then MOST and not more elegant than the person they write to or about. :) I love it and thank you. Great Haiku! :)

Love,Dragonslayer

AWThis so sweet, I watching you two write to each other. Very nice, and what a great reference to the Poem I think that I shall never see. This poem gains so much from the dedication. You might condsider putting it on the page it's self and not just as an intro.

This haiku, elegant in itself, strikes a tone of quiet beauty that resonates satisfyingly with the subject matter.

(and is marvelously fitting for both Kilmer's and Dragonslayer's works)