Wow...I really like how you used the same two lines to tie both the beginning and the ending together...Wonderful job. Though sad, I really enjoyed this piece.

Every Thought

oohh... I like this one too... it's emotional... :p hahahait's rare that one comes across poetry as good as this. ^_^"How I long to fly free,to break from this cage of mirrorsand reveal the real me."was my favorite part... ^_^keep writing! =)

All I can say is..

WOW.

I'm jealous that you can write so well!! I suck at poetry and you're amazing. My favorite part was:

Visions of the perfection

I must strive to attain,

But always, I fall short

This really showed alot of emotion and it was really nicely done. Good read, keep up the good work. I hope you write more soon :) Thanks for reviewing for my fic by the way! I'm glad you like it so far.

CK

Aww!! Do you need a hug?

The last two lines really made this poem for me. I often feel like this myself; longing to take off the mask I hide behind. But don't we all? :) Great poem. Lovely.

~writerofdreams

Ahh, awesome imagery...mirrors have always fascinated me so you can understand why this is appealing. ^^;;

o my...i absolutely loved this poem, how you were able to actually think up of writing this will remain a mystery to me, i would've never thought about it in a million years. but i really liked this...some awesome lines too, and it was just...wow...im speechless.lol.

My favorite lines though, were:

How I long to fly free,

to break from this cage of mirrors

and reveal the real me.

Before my soul becomes one

with the ghostly views of others."

That is a very true statement, that i wish more ppl would agree on, to just want to break free and reveal their real selves. Anyways, i promise no more rambling. :P *kw* this was amazing.

~Britney

Nice... I like the way youhave put this together.. great work!

You took a cliche and worded so that it actually sounded like poetry. good job.

-pictographic.love