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| Dr. Colleen 2006-09-27 ch 1,  | abuseThis is such a pretty poem. It dances.Cheers,Dr. Colleen |
| bright horizon splash 2006-03-22 ch 1, | abusehooray, I love water too! I love the last line, sweet poem, great job. :) |
| boys kiss girls 2006-02-28 ch 1, | abuse*sigh* I love water. =) I love the descriptions you used in this. |
| Imperfections make perfect 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abusethank youthis is so pure and so beautifulit almost makes me cry everytime |
| -JC 2006-01-26 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is one of the best poems i have ever readyou are a geniusyes yes you are |
| ode to a firefly 2006-01-20 ch 1, | abuseOh, so pretty! The only thing I would suggest is that you change "hate and love duel" to "love and hate duel." It just seems to flow better that way. Other than that, beautiful job! :) ~Christine~ |