Chapter 1: This is really well written, everything flows together nicely. I like the duel imagery between Shift and Geren. I'll be reading your other chapters too! Good start keep it up^-^ Thank you for your comments btw!

Wow, this is quit interesting. I had my suspisions and now they are confirmed, but no problem. Its still really good. And if you don't mind writing the next chapter, I'd read it. So, please hurry! :)

Wow, this is...fantastic. How can you write like that? I hardly feel my writing should read not even posted on Fiction Press, but your stories are really good. Sorry if I'm throwing lots of comments at you. But this IS really nicely written.