AWESOME STORY! I was riveted until the end! Nice comebacks, too. "Alyssa's so stupid she got hit by a parked car" haha. Keep it up!

ya i know that everyone was sceptical of your story at first, but i found it very good in the end. keep up the good work (Cliched as that is).

aww, the second story on fictionpress ive watched happen from beginning to end. although i know i wasnt one of your first reviewers. but still, its always sad, whether the ending is happy or not. i dont know, im weird. li's awesome, by the way, lol. and shes living with alicia!! thats cool, too. a perfect ending, i think. and youre welcome, i love reviewing!!

keep on writing and congratulations, on finishing your story ~~MWRenaee-:|:-

usually, endings just happen so sudden;y when theres action. at least for the stories ive read. but this one didnt seem rushed at all, and it was very clear. awesome!! -grins again- and i loved the actual ending, too. cant wait for the epilogue!! hurry hurry, please and thank you!!

keep on writing ~~MWRenaee-:|:-

Cool! This is a really awesome story! Involving Romeo and Juliet in some ways! Really romantic! But the thing that confuses me is the part in chapter 2. Why would a teacher make Elissa stay after school all because she got one answer wrong? That's kinda weird but I'm not saying that to be mean! I like this story! Hey! Since I reviewed, you wanna see my story? It's romance and fantasy! When you read it, don't make fun of it, criticize it, or flame it cause they all hurt ALOT. But I do like your story though. It's cool! Update soon!

YOUVE FINALLY UPDATED!! -grins- i checked back here, a couple times to see why you hadnt been updating, and i couldnt figure out why... yes, i remembered your story. how couldnt i?? as frustrated as the FYE4 made me, everythings gotta get cleared up sometime. but even more frustrated!! arg, stupid li (only because he told... tattle tale xp) and stupid mortimer... (makews me think of mortimer mouse, hehe... okay .for now on, mortimer is mortimer mouse. and thats final.)

i saw only a few spelling mistakes, but other than that, everything was fine. detail included. and what a nice come back youve made, lol. im still interested in romeo and juliet, btw. i still need to get the book, or something, too. :)

keep on writing ~~M.W. Renaee-:|:-

Wow, i like the plot so far, really good idea. Try not to jump around quite so much, like for example when it jumped so suddenly from the class to the detention after school (not in this chapter) what i do is i write a huge amount and then i go back and take out all the unecessary bits. I really like the way it's turning out so far, though.

im so glad you continued this!! writers block is such a pain... we all get it. example: ive been on writers block for the lognest time, for The Little White Book. but the words just keep coming for A Story the Silver Wind Tells...odd, i know, but hey, thats how it is.

anyways, not all that much happened here, but thats okay. thats perfectly fine. im waiting for the next chapter, however, so please bring it soon!!

keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:-

*cries* Wh-what if Li is in workas with the uncle! That would be horrid! *slaps Li* DONT THINK ABOUT IT!

*grabs his arm and drags to the library* NOW! CONFESS YOUR LOVE! *stomps foot* NOW!

Wow, its amazing what you think you may know about your friends...and then when you take a deeper look what you really see in them. How different they are in a different point of view...

Anyways...

Is li starting to like Fiera?! I hope so!

wow, im sorry, i forgot to add you to my author alerts list!! i put pretty much everyone i review on there, cuz its a pain going to review history... ive got 20-some pages, and i hate going through them -.-

anyways, wow!! is Li fially starting to like her?! -sigh- we'll never know... she had to go and work!! xp she shouldve just stayed. well, anyways, please please PLEASE update soon. i want to see whatll happen next!!

and btw, youre getting me interested in romeo and juliet. ive never read the whole story, or heard it. maybe ill go and check it out soon...?

keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:-

hey, i wish we had a family tressure, too! :(... oh well.

nice story, it took a few chapters for me to get into it, but once i did, i liked it. please, update soon.

keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:-

OH a family tressure! *looks back at her parents* I WISH *WE* had a family tressure!!

Parents: *roll their eyes and ignore her, figuring its just another random thing she shouted out*

Meh: T.T

TWAS THE ELEPHANTS WHO CUT THE ROPE! I BET IT! *runs around flailing, screaming about fat yeti elephants*

Hehehe. Things always start off rough, but if you work on them, put your time into them, your own sweat and blood, it can be paradise ^_^