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| Nikita 2006-04-11 ch 1,  | This one's as beautifully put as the others are..n trust me if i start postin reviews for all yr writings..i ll be in a serious loss of words..lotsa sappy content..and i cant help wantin you to write a happy poem! :)but they're lovely nonetheless...keep writing :) |
| simpleplan13 2006-03-22 ch 1,  | I like this it's very nice.. I love hte italicized parts.. thanks so much for all your reviews! |
| V@rsh@ 2006-02-09 ch 1, | dis is realyy nice..blieve me...really meaninful..simple wurds but beauiful! |
| Formerly 2006-02-08 ch 1, | Regarding your review, my comments are not always negative. I leave favorable reviews once or twice a week. This is because most work on Fictionpress is absolute garbage, due to serious problems--for instance, people writing poems where they use "u" instead of "you." If you expect me to leave a positive comment on something like that, you are laboring under a severe misapprehension. |
| les petits bateaux 2006-02-08 ch 1, | Very nicely put...everything was just so perfect and beautiful. Love it a lot. Good job. :) |
| chaitu 2006-02-07 ch 1, | its gr8 nice way of expressing ur feelings |
| Princess-anna57 2006-02-06 ch 1, | Cool poem, really good! Well done! Thanks for the review! Write on! ~Anna~ |
| ThatsKiwiForYa 2006-01-28 ch 1, | Same for your poem!It's great!I wouldn't exactly say I know the feeling of it..well cause I don't.Make its awesome and you did a great job on this one!&& I can tell a lot of girls could connect with this poem too. Mucho love. |
| PuppyPadfoot 2006-01-27 ch 1, | I love your way with words. I don't know how to explain it but the way you decribe things makes it so interesting. And the repition made it even better. ~Puppy~ |
| sneha 2006-01-27 ch 1, | wow! personally, this is ur best(at par with 'dreams') i didn't think the theme was vague... what you probably didn't explain was why you had to let go, but that was not the point of the poem. i think whatever you've wanted to say- you've said it- and well!i know you can do better still. |
| hyder 2006-01-26 ch 1, | shail damn u its worth it!try re try..he might still like u!lovely poem..first one of urs i actually understood.. |
| NO LONGER USING 2006-01-25 ch 1, | wow this is really good, love the metaphors...big fan of those...well this was a great poem and i loved it keep writing. tata and that's all for now, lacy |
| bluewindfire 2006-01-24 ch 1, | very nice poem. i like the metaphors :) and thanks for the reviews! |
| Neonasty 2006-01-21 ch 1, | The peom was pretty good...but I'm sure you can do better...It was too vague while dealing with the aspect of "letting go", where you just sketched the skeleton of a theme...but didn't really etch any storyline. Don't take this too harshly...only trying to help... Having said all that I have above...I'm flattered to have this poem dedicated to me!! Thanks...P.S - I'll see you in court for stealing my line!! LOL |