Reviews for Sinners Pathway - FictionPress.com

eraced 2006-11-25 ch 1,	abusewow! nice i love it. keep writing. drenched in shadows. ~erAced~
Kyokokitty 2006-01-22 ch 1,	abuseThis is reall a good piece. I love the sortta sweetness that the narratior shows to the 'child'. The way the poem is set, the way the words are strung together so elegantly, like a delicate flower that was killed by the chill. Your words are so deep and moving. I feel the need to cry, in a good way.
poetic abortion 2006-01-19 ch 1,	abuselove the "smile child..." repitition, it gave the poem a depth that it may have otherwise might have lacked. i lovelovelove the; "we'll show up their happy ignorance / with the music's afflicting trance" great vocab and just hauntingly satarical line (of which i do not know why). just an all around fabulous piece. ~* noelle
sogni dolci 2006-01-19 ch 1,	abuseWow! This is exquisite. I am currently a major part of theatre and dance at my high school, so this has touched something deep inside of me. Thank you for sharing. --Sogni dolce [sweet dreams]