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| simpleplan13 2006-03-17 ch 1, | abusei like this a lot... well written |
| seasick 2006-02-16 ch 1, | abuseWonderful flow- very quotable- keep up the good work.! |
| Shane 2006-01-28 ch 1, anon. | abusewow this is absolutly amazing...i love it...i can relate to parts, i love the line "Dont bothert to ask,you'll just get lies..." this is well writen |
| Charmed Melody 2006-01-19 ch 1, | abuseOMG I love your writing, I can relate o it so wellI love this one, and I'm going to read more. |
| finger on the trigger 2006-01-19 ch 1, | abuse...nice...sorta, you know? really liked the concept...but it's kinda cliché-ish. no intend to flame or whatever, everyone sure knows i'm not perfect. but you could've tried to use a bit more imagery...although it IS your style. whatever, rambling already.buh.bye. |