Reviews for Don't You Dare Talk To Me

Tikvah Ariel
2006-01-26
ch 1,

"A-hole"

Takes away from the crediabiltily, like your afraid to swear but your fine implicating it.

This seems more like a rant, and though I like turning cliches on their head, I felt it was angst and not really interested in flow. Just chopped up sentences.

It wasn't bad, and it was interesting enough, but I didn't like the "light at the end of the tunnel" one because it wasn't as strong of an argument.

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