doesn't seem like a bad story, maybe you'll want to update it, and explain the cryptic last sentence, lol. ^.~

~Zero

Fantastic Write the next chapter soon

wow... nice touch. real nice...

im really enjoying this story.. and im glad youre having fun with the characters. i can really see it in the way you write them...

nice fight scene by the way...very, very cool... :)

Not a bad chapter, although some more descriptive action would be nice. I want to HEAR the sound of the Hunters being slain! ::cackles madly::

Anyway. Becky certainly seems very arrogant about her combat skills; perhaps there is a smackdown waiting for her in the future? We await with eager eyes!

A good chapter overall. Nice introduction to the other Shifter clans, and also a nice elaboration of the personality traits that run through each clan(ie, Desiders are more risk takers, etc)

And that Aidan guy is really awesome, too. I want to see him kill some people next chapter, though. =)

Good chapter, but the ending seemed abrupt. But other than that, it was great.

cool... party time...

love it... and i can tell youre really getting into it... :)

keep it up!

wow... cool... kinda creepy but cool...

love twins... you totally hooked me in now... :)

and cool, thanks...

Short and sweet. A bit of a filler chapter, yeah?

This is the same One Desire that reviews all your other stories. I'm just too lazy to log in.

But yes. You're writing as an older character. Yay. Have fun with that. But be careful that you don't slip back into high school...ness. I've done that a couple of times.

So um. I liked this chapter. Nice introduction to the main characters.

oh, ouch! love this character already!

shes got such an edge to her!

brilliant, as always! really well described too!

hooked. =]

nice start... i like how youve given us the intro on werewolves and all that... like folklore or mythology... i can almost hear a storyteller reading this out loud...

well done... please continue soon!

This prologue sounds very intriguing. It gives a good glimpse to how your story will be working and what will be involved. One small portion of it seemed a bit confusing to me when you were describng the effect the phases of the moon had on the weres. Other than that it was is was very good and I can't wait to see how the first chapter will start out.

I really enjoyed it because at the moment I am working on a werewolf/Lycan novel here on Fictionpress if you ever wish to check it out.