That was a touching poem, nicely written.
Keep up the good work

I almost cried when I read this. Nothing else I've ever read here has done that to me...I can really relate to this because someone I was close to died..Of the same cause this November. It did touch me...And it made my favorites list. Keep writing.

Hey, I've just read all your stuff under all your names and can really identify with it! I really like your style and the rhyming pattern works really well, though the meter is occasionally off, everything just seems to pull together! Big fan! Just brilliant! x

Oh my god. That is so true! I don't know how many people I've lost because of that and I can only assume that's how they felt. This is truly lovely. I'm adding it promptly to my favorites.

L. Kantenseter