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Reviews For: Obscurity Denied
sarah1491 2006-01-30 . chapter 1
Good poem! ^^ I like the rhetorical questions in the last 2 lines. ^^ awesome~
Taehl 2006-01-20 . chapter 1
Good stuff... But it seems you left some spaces out between words... Like "Butfound", "Butgot", and "beenasked".
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