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| Maybreakmyheart 2008-07-22 ch 19,  | abuseHonestly you have talent, it's easy to write a romance *fluff fluff kiss kiss love love* , but it's hard to write a romance with ...Substance. Thats how your stories are, they leave me with a feeling of well being or peace or something. You pull the reader in and let them learn from the characters mistakes. This story is like all your others; not a let down. |
| rockjam 2008-07-20 ch 19, | abuseLoved it. It was light-hearted and not so dramatic. And I LOVED it for it. Keep writing. |
| Maybreakmyheart 2008-07-20 ch 4, | abuseLol this is kinda messed up...John... but it still pretty good I thought it was funny that he had the whole relationship planned out |
| Maybreakmyheart 2008-07-20 ch 3, | abuseGood chapter, I like how at first she doesn't give in, it'd be to fast and unrealistic. :D |
| Maybreakmyheart 2008-07-20 ch 2, | abuseinteresting plot line, I love the situation that has arouse...very creative...Exited to see how this goes |
| Maybreakmyheart 2008-07-20 ch 1, | abuseOh...good story so far, I read another story by you so I'm totally stoked! |
| Hazelnut-Romance 2008-07-20 ch 19, | abusecute and sweet. go die chloe! hehe |
| reader 2008-07-04 ch 13, anon. | abuseAww that was so cute!! But cliffhanger!! |
| reader 2008-07-04 ch 6, anon. | abuseWAIT, English isn't your first language? Oh my lord, you are brilliant. I'm so jealous. I wish I could be so good in another language. |
| reader 2008-07-04 ch 5, anon. | abuseThese are the most hilarious titles ever! Sheer GENIUS. Plus, I love how this story is going!! |
| Amorelle 2008-07-02 ch 19, | abuse*dies from the cuteness* nyah! love it! |
| Genato 2008-05-28 ch 19, | abuseThe fic was good, even if you used the basic plot of a Korean drama. But you really need to improve your writing. Your spelling, grammar and stuff. Or just get a freakin' beta so you don't have to think too much on it. Your writing has potential.. but it has a room for improvement. I'm not trying to flame you or anything, just giving my opinion. Hmm.. also, I think you should develop your characters more, like the relationship between Jason and Lauren, Stella's mom, Mrs. Devane. I mean, they're not the lead characters but they deserve a bit more space in the fic. Also, slow down.. things happened way too fast. But all in all, this is a good fic. :) |
| Ami-Sprite 2008-03-30 ch 19, | abuseClaviee! I couldnt find this on MCMB, so I had to make an account here just to read this story :P Lol. I. Loved. It. Simple as. :D Trouble in High Heels is like the sequel, right? And Pursuit of Chocolate is...? Anyway, loved it! Cant wait to read more of your stories! Love, Ami xx |
| PrincessNancy 2008-03-26 ch 19, | abuseI read it! I read the 1st Zephyr's series!! :D How many are there, were you telling me? XoXo NAN! Btw Its Tres awesome. and Ye, we AL love choclate! :D |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-03-14 ch 19, | abuseAw how cute! That was really good. :) |