 oh la la! 2009-11-29 . chapter 15 Well, isn't it just convenient that they're in bed together? I hope you have a good explanation or I would have to take this as you taking an easy way out. |
 Yellow.Jellow 2009-11-29 . chapter 15 It seems like Stella had a change of personality towards the end, she doesn't usually talk like that! Also, I know you said you would edit this later... but it's been a long time, really very long time. |
 Yellow.Jellow 2009-11-28 . chapter 5 It seems the typos are becoming more frequent! Also, I love your chapter titles! |
 Yellow.Jellow 2009-11-28 . chapter 1 M promising story!! Couple questions though: not that it matters but why the 5-yr age difference between them? is it important to the plot maybe? What happened to Stella's last job that she is desperate for a new one? And if she was so desperate, aren't there other restaurants in town she could have looked at?
Also, "merry" not mary. This story could use a little editing but I can't wait to read more! |
 Your Execution 2009-11-19 . chapter 19AhhMyGod that story is so cute :D |
 HelgaBertoni 2009-10-25 . chapter 19Loved it! |
 53BookTitles 2009-07-25 . chapter 19AH!
Happy Ending!!
And I loved the chapter names :)
xx |
 candykillz 2009-07-12 . chapter 19that was... wow, good wow. can't describe it in words! I love it. Jess is so... adorable, no wonder everyone loved her. I read two of your stories today, you're a very good writer! Keep it up!:) |
 VTDark 2009-06-26 . chapter 19I'm done reading! I absolutely love the ending :D
anyway, I'd like to give you a longer review but I'm feeling really sleepy now so I won't torture you with a novel or something. hehe. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story!
P.S. I absolutely adore Jess! She's so cute!
-VTDark |
 VTDark 2009-06-26 . chapter 10haha! i have to stop reading now but i couldn't. Oh well! let's just forget that i have to wake up early tomorrow XD
I'm loving this story :D |
 Songorita 2009-06-03 . chapter 19Great story I loved it and Jess is so cute! I can't wait to read more. Although I am sadden as I get closer and closer to completely reading all your stories. |
 purplepush 2009-05-01 . chapter 19This is my second time through, and I still enjoyed it. A brief, good read.
Thank you for the experience,
Push |
 all4hydration 2009-04-21 . chapter 2o... |
 momo3069 2009-03-03 . chapter 19I read this sometime ago. Today I saw, that it isn´t a stand alone, so I read it again and will read the otheres now.
I like Stella, just because she isn´t perfekt. |
 intercostalspace 2009-01-29 . chapter 1oh, reminds me of the series "kim sam soon" |