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Reviews For: Love Me
atalantea
2006-01-19
ch 1, 		I think this would sound better as a song. :D The words are repetitive but in an okay way, not the annoying way. Very heartfelt though. :D
BJ Worth
2006-01-19
ch 1, 		very desperate and harried writing style. Very effective. I thought the poem was not bad.
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