 Vervain B. Aricin 2006-01-22 . chapter 1Wow...that's really all I can say. You need to do more poetry. |
 CascaOzy 2006-01-20 . chapter 1Nyo... I kinda feel like it's partly my fault. If it is, I beg and plead for forgiveness. As always your writing portrays your mood perfectly. I wish I knew how I could help you. |
 MAD-MAN 2006-01-20 . chapter 1 i could annlize this but im not sure you want that. instead ill simply tell you that good things are there, sometimes you just have to look harder.
later |
 randompoetry 2006-01-20 . chapter 1I like how its a prayer to God. I like the quote in it, and this line was great. "Give me enough stability to make my hands stop shaking." I'm sorry for the tough times you are having, I hope it all gets better. |
 Princess-anna57 2006-01-20 . chapter 1*wipes a tear away*, aw! *gives you a cookie*, don't worry, God will bless you wonderfully if you truly believe. Good poem, thanks for sharing! Keep writing! ^_^
~Anna~ |