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| LDS Mage 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abusewow, you're good at poetry! |
| SwordsmanShadow 2006-05-21 ch 1, | abusehere's a little tip: when you said "you know that we'll never bejust like the light against the darkness"think of this the light is nothing wiht out the night life is of ballance some times you need both to be totally there. it's like 2 halfs make a whole. do you kind of understand what i'm getting at? if you like some go for what do ya got to lose? try it. but i understand it's a little scary ain't it? don't worry bout it every thing will turn out for the better in it's own time just wait and if you're christain like me try praying thats what i do when i confused. but remember these are all sugestions.signed B.C. |
| Olivine 2006-01-20 ch 1, | abusesimply beautiful. again, for "Isabel"? just wondering. but, yeah, i like your poems. but so far, theyre about heart break. heart break is sad. ive been through that. it isnt fun at all. anyways, here's hoping that your next poem is happy :) keep on writing ~~Wintertigress -:|:- |
| R-Vega-X 2006-01-20 ch 1, | abuseSad but touching. R-Vega-X |
| Princess-anna57 2006-01-20 ch 1, | abuseAww, so sad! Well written. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing! ^_^ ~Anna~ |