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| Grace 2006-05-06 ch 3, anon. | abuseinteresting start, old idea but nice execution. However, London seems pretty perfect, the only flaw you've introduced so far is that she can't dance. Ridiculously rich, and from your description, quite underweight: 5"8 and 104 lbs? Jesus that's thin. I love the other characters though, and I'd like to see where you take this. |
| victim of reality88 2006-04-25 ch 3,  | abusehey i really really like this story so far. You should definitely continue with it. Its very well written and the plot is great. So please please please continue it. BYE! |
| brokenheartsbeat 2006-04-07 ch 3, | abuseoh man! looks like another great story. i love your writing. update update update! |
| becxfok01 2006-04-05 ch 3, | abuseI'm LOVING your story so far. It seems like a typical high school story, but it's got its own edge and most importantly, well written. Pls update soon! |
| ilovetheopera 2006-03-02 ch 2, | abusesorry. can't say much about this one... what's with the branded stuff? okay i get it, london's super super rich. like really rich. my god, she even has a office. huh. even my private school's not that preppy. and your plot... doesnt seem to be going anywhere. other than that, no grammar mistakes so far except maybe like typos so i was quite happy(: but yeah, so far, completely uninterested, and damn shallow story. eh, sorry. |
| Miz Em 2006-02-26 ch 2, | abuseGet right in to it the first chap, yey. These girls crack me up. Anywho I'm excited for the next chap. ^_^ |
| Miz Em 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseThis deffinatly sounds promising ^^ I'm excited about it, so I hope you keep going. I think it's great the you have character photo's too ^^ |
| Mi 2006-02-26 ch 2, anon. | abuseWow I really really really like your story, it's great! I hope you decide to continue, I can't wait to see what happens! Update soon!! |
| awaitinglove 2006-01-28 ch 2, | abuseWow, i'm really surprised you don't have a lot of reviews for this story! I absolutely love it and Noah seems like a sweetie. Heidi is a ** and David is just a cutie ^^ I'll definately tell some of my reviewers about this story when i get my next chapter up. Update soon and keep up the great work! -Lauren |