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| Cerasylvania 2008-07-06 ch 37,  | abusehey i love this story it just reminds me of my group of friends minus the situations but still a bunch that well except people for who they are and especially people who want to get their body pierced, tattoed, their favorite color is black.etc. but you know also the fact that they well stand up for each other like a mini gang lol but yup love it and you know what i think it would be interesting to see their lives after marriage and a honeymoon you know but that is definately something you have to choose for yourself. i just have one question: what would be the one thing you'ld want to be remembered for? |
| littlewitchgirl77 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abusegod |
| atreyu love 2007-07-24 ch 1, | abusethis is interesting . |
| siddika 2007-02-15 ch 37, | abuseamazing job |
| dawn's unforgiving darkness 2006-12-05 ch 37, | abuse0_o |
| dawn's unforgiving darkness 2006-11-30 ch 9, | abusethis story is quite interesting |
| akaCHEEKS 2006-10-21 ch 37, | abuseomg! it's done! **! and when i checked this story.. i thought it was only an update.. but it's seriously done! wow! omg! i love it! with the whole thing. with all the drama and everything and all their pain and hardships... but then you made it sound like all of those happened in one day cause in a shorter version.. it was like he left her, days later he realizes his mistake and he comes back to her. get me? i mean what was that? no offense.. i'm not trying to be mean. but i'm trying to give you constructive critizism you know... pretty much.. work on details.. |
| akaCHEEKS 2006-10-08 ch 20, | abuseit's going nice so far. but you should try and check your grammars and everything. some of the words i know you're trying to make em sound ghetto and come out that way with the slang and everything. but the details need to be typed properly. that's all for my creative critizicing. hope your not thinking i'm a ** for pointing this out cause most authors get mad when i tell them something that needs to get better at. |
| Out-Spoken-Runaway 2006-10-08 ch 37, | abuseWhat do you mean 'not the end'?? A sequel, perhaps? They better not get seperated... I didn't really expect it to end it here, but now that I think about it, there isn't much else that could happen. Loved the ending; keep writing! Out-Spoken-Runaway |
| Hope.And.What.Not 2006-10-08 ch 37, | abusei know this is a weird thing to say but i dont give a crap, i dont think you should carry this on. I think you should levae it be. Although i just got a cool thought in my head you may like but ill tell you if your interested in carrying it on. meggzz x |
| akaCHEEKS 2006-10-07 ch 1, | abusejust started reading. finish the rest tomorrow |
| let me scream my heart out 2006-10-07 ch 37, | abuseomg i cant believe you've finished this story is ace hope u update your oher soon |
| Kita Tsuki 2006-10-07 ch 37, | abuseBeautiful ending. Peace! |
| Far-away-Fantasies 2006-09-08 ch 4, | abuseAHH. they dance together. thats soo cute! can't wait to read the rest of the story. luv it. |
| Out-Spoken-Runaway 2006-09-08 ch 36, | abuse:O!! Lmao, that's true though. Pfft, must be boring for the guys, all this wedding crap. I would probably be unenthusiastic about that stuff too. It just ain't me. Jay already knows what dress she has, right? xD Your next chapter should be the wedding...but eh. I'm guessing the story is coming near an end. :'( Keep writing! Out-Spoken-Runaway |