Your writing betrays your age. This is a very good poem. It flows well, it sounds great, and it appeals to the emotions. I will continue to read your writing with great pleasure. P.S. Thank you very much for the review.P.P.S. I guess age doesn't count for much, seeing as I'm only 15, and I receive a lot of praise (probably undue) for my writing.

Interesting... nice mix of emotions and description. Felt a little unfinished though. I think you need another line or couple of lines on the end maybe. I don't know. Nice poem though! Keep writing!

Very well written. I felt the saddness as I read it. I personally enjoy works that can make me use my senses. You too are an excellent writer. Oh, and fyi.. I rated it M because some people just can't handle the talk of faith and spirituality. I'd rather it be restricted to those who are mature enough to read it and review it for what's it's worth aside from the subject matter.